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Hanna Delaney's avatar

I love that you've made use of all the names. Brilliant 😂

Scoot's avatar

This is everything i hoped it would be and more, well done 😂😂😂

A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Great names! I could almost pronounce them.

David Perlmutter's avatar

It reads like that Disney movie "Onward"...

Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

I don't believe I've seen that one, actually...

David Perlmutter's avatar

It was a few years ago. A fantasyland merged with our contemporary world, complete with feral unicorns. The leads were a couple of elf guys who sounded like the guys in your story.