Evil Madeline getting knocked out so fast felt anti-climatic, though I assume however the engine issue gets resolved has her escape in someway. Would also like a clearer break between perspectives, like a horizontal line on the page. Evil Madeline, or Wadeline, is still my favorite character, like the unrepentant evil.
I'll make a note to work on perspective breaks for upcoming stories; that's a fair point about the knock-out, although let me assure you, this is not the end of Evil Madeleine at all. Far from it. #dundundun
Evil Madeline getting knocked out so fast felt anti-climatic, though I assume however the engine issue gets resolved has her escape in someway. Would also like a clearer break between perspectives, like a horizontal line on the page. Evil Madeline, or Wadeline, is still my favorite character, like the unrepentant evil.
I'll make a note to work on perspective breaks for upcoming stories; that's a fair point about the knock-out, although let me assure you, this is not the end of Evil Madeleine at all. Far from it. #dundundun